Reviews for Confusion
WMS chapter 1 . 4/16/2006
i like it, sounds good

is it supposed to be konfusing?or is it it supposed to klarify your konfgused mind

p.s.G-d is the traditional jewish way to write the word "God", i am christian, but christianity stems from Judeaism, and so i try to incorporate the same laws and principals into my daily life in a praktikal manner. the Jews have many names for G-d, such as elohim, adonai, eli, but the most sacred name is Yahweh, and no one save for the high priests of the temple, by jewish law, kan even utter the name of G-d, as itimplies an understanding and knowledge of G-d that it is believed humans aren't supposed to posess. so when writing skriptures the scholars would take out the vowels of his name and spell it YHWH, so thatr the reader wouldnt be able to pronounce his name. and that tradition stemmed into the modern jewish world of english speaking Jews, especially among messianic jews, so that is why i do it, just for traditions sake... it doesnt make alot of sense.. byut then again... most things dont
NO LONGER USING chapter 1 . 4/13/2006
very expressive, great way to show your emotions and confusion, but with hope at the end of it...good job
helpless-pretender chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
I love how your writings leave an open thought ending! Keep on writing! God bless
kenzie0809 chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
As strange as this may sound, that did make sense...A lot of sense...This poem reminds me of my situation these past few weeks...
Beenie chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
That was awesome! I can really relate.