|Reviews for amsterdam|
| Dr. Dick Nixon chapter 4 . 5/3/2006
thats kinda cool, I really liked it which is more than I can say of most of the stuff I find on this site...keep it up, delve into deeper emotion... check out my stuff if you want.
| Annabell Lee chapter 1 . 4/28/2006
I really like the way this sounds - the harsh sounds in the first bit and the softer sounds in the second.
| Moondog Dozier chapter 4 . 4/11/2006
Deep in scene, and a depth of consciousness. A wonderfully well quilted work. Unique, and per usual, a marvelous rush of wordplay and meaning. Well crafted.
| Moondog Dozier chapter 3 . 4/11/2006
So much staggerring movement. This trips in and out of motion and vividry. Great write.
| Moondog Dozier chapter 2 . 4/11/2006
Very visual scene. Picturesque and real. Well done.
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
Sensory overload. Well designed and developed. Your works are like mazes to weave in and out of.
| Morcirith chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
i really enjoyed the second stanza. it reminded me of summertime .
| Naibz chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
I want to go to amsterdam. as for the poem, it reminds me of one time when I was tripping on shrooms and watched Charley and the chocolate factory(the one directed by tim burton). it reminds me of charley's naboughrhood. good piece.
| Dobhar Chu chapter 4 . 4/11/2006
Like these. These are good. Good are these which are they and they be good.