Reviews for Growing Up
Jason J. Ross chapter 1 . 4/13/2006
An excellent choice of topic: the Birthday. It's perfect time to reflect on the past and ponder the future. A good haiku sequence.
The Fourth Fate chapter 1 . 4/13/2006
Aww. I love it. I know the feeling, looking back and knowing a chapter is about to close in your life... Yeah. I'm actually going through that right now so I can really relate. This is great. I really love it. My favorite lines were:

"That fate twisted dreams and/Delivered new hope?" Which is a little cliche, I guess, since you used them for your clip but I really loved them and wanted to tell you that. Bravo.
Viktrona chapter 1 . 4/13/2006
Change is life
ChasingPerfection chapter 1 . 4/12/2006
hm...not sure you can call this a haiku as they all build off each other. it's more like...a poem with haiku stanzas. I really like the two lines about home "far away from home" and "making a new home". ties it up and still gives it a direction.
Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 4/12/2006
I like how you brough it full circle. An almost calm way of expressing your fears. Nicely done.
sunday night sky chapter 1 . 4/12/2006
i know what u mean! i really understand this! great job.
Aquafied chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
like is one pit of awkwardnessi was talking about age recently

made me feel awfully old.
MallowsWins chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
I just turn twenty myself last month. Beleive me, I know how you feel, I wrote a lot of haikus about youth. Good series of haikus because they are honest. Anything thats honest is almost always good.

Peace, Daze