|Reviews for Belong|
| priceless gallery chapter 1 . 6/28/2006
Yes you do lad :) your here to write more beautiful poems lol
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
The idea of fitting it is usually more like squish and bend yourself until you can bare the pain enough to go along with everybody else. I like.
| boys kiss girls chapter 1 . 4/14/2006
this one makes me think of what one of my friends. he always gets mad at himself for not accomplishing anything but he doesn't know what to do. sleeping bugs him as well because nothing gets accomplished. he's an interesting individual. anyway, great haiku. )
| mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 4/13/2006
interesting. has a unique tone to it.
| D. Rochelle chapter 1 . 4/13/2006
I will agree that it isn't your best work, but as you said in the summary, everyone can relate. Feeling out of place is a universal human emotion... at least in my opinion. Keep writing!
| sunday night sky chapter 1 . 4/13/2006
i can definitely relate. i like this, it really speaks to me. great job.
| breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 4/12/2006
aw sad, yet so relatable. i know what you mean in this.
| lavenderfoxdaisy chapter 1 . 4/12/2006
i always like the original poignant reflection in the end : Yet here I sit,
it's very reeling and keeps us interested!
this really catptured my attention, because as you said, i can relate to it as can anyone else...very very poignant.
| Safira chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
Yes, this is definitely a haiku everyone can relate to in their own ways. I think sometimes it's better if we don't think too much...pondering life and all...lest we go insane.
Breathes - Autumn.
| Vyvyan chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
Hmm...interesting haiku. Nice.