I just found this story and I really think it is interesting and I want to know how this is going to end so that's why I hope you will update this someday :)

MAke more! Moore of your wondorous story! More or I will die D

interesting...

HAHAHAHAHA

I read the conclusion and went..."wtf?"

A little too much with the British slang. I'm around Brits all the time and none of them talk like that. Maybe a little, but not to that degree. Is it a parody or are you genuinely trying to imitate an Englishman/Irishman? If the later, I recommend you ease up. Good grammar and syntax so far though. Will this be incest? It seems to lean that way.

_ i like this story a whole bunch. wanna update it? :D

Quite an interesting story. I especially like Ned...he's goofy, but a good friend with a good heart (and his and Evan's scenes together are always adorable). Don't much like Emerson though - what the heck is going through this guy's head, eh? I've greatly enjoyed reading this, and hope that there's more to come soon.

I was wondering when you're going to update.

Just to say this chapter was really good and so is your story. Where in England is Emerson's accent supposed to be from - it's really funny!

Hello.

I don't know if you're meaning to put the brothers together or Evan and Emerson together, but somehow I, okay I know I'm pretty damn weird in the head, but somehow I like the idea of Sebastian and Evan being together more than Evan and Emerson.. Yeah, I know I'm weird but whatever. :)

But other than that, I really like this story. I love your writingstyle and humor and sarcasm and everything in this story (and others too), so keep it up! :)

This a great story.

Evan is a little crazy. His brother would give great advice in this situation. Perhaps Evan really doesn't want to be gay. No reason to take out his frustrations on his brother. Family need each other, son.

Hopefully Emerson will bring the best out of him. Cheers!

i dont know what to think of this... i dont really like incest stories, out of everything they creep me out, but if sebastian and evan are meant to be, as you're hinting at, i don't think i'd mind all that much. i really hope you can update soon, and maybe make the english guy's point of view easier to read?

i'm hoping this story doesn't have incest...

I love when you said small penis and all. I just started laughing. I like the start.

O I like this so far! But you have to update as soon as possible. I just wish that Evan wasn't so... rude to his brother. ya know? He could watch a few things that he says... anywhoo, I want to know what's going to happen next! I love all the characters in here so far, but I have to say that Ned is by far, my favorite! He sounds so adorable and like he'd be a really good friend - Please update as soon as you get the chance!