Reviews for Morgue of the Desert
witeaya chapter 28 . 12/3/2010
i cannot imagine how the kind vince can became so hostile
wistful-ambtions chapter 5 . 11/24/2008
it doesn't seem odd to her that he keeps bgging her about patrick's theories? m and i wonder what she's gonna think when she realizes that she never gave him directions
avidmoonstar chapter 28 . 12/16/2007
I really liked this story. Generally I like reading stories about vampires and such, but it's always interesting to read a new take on how vampires live. I can't wait to get caught up in the sequel.
Kana chapter 25 . 6/25/2006
Oh, I love you. Two chapters in one go...


I was suspecting this to happen sooner or later. Actually, I knew it from like the chapter in which Patrick got turned. It was so obvious that one day she'd want it too. Aw...well, I feel really sorry for both.


P.S. Is the new gang secretly evil?
starrynight04 chapter 25 . 6/25/2006
*on edge of sit*
Kana chapter 23 . 6/24/2006
Oh, okay. Hurry if you can, 'cause I wanna see what happens next.


Kanalily chapter 22 . 6/22/2006
Hey, thanks for replying to my review! It made me very happy. Nobody ever really replies to my comments, so I'm pretty glad that I got my own little bold paragraph.

Actually, I don't think that the Debbie-ness is something you should worry about. I'm probably the only person to have even had that thought come across my mind, which isn't actually that surprising. Yeah, I'm weird like that.

William came across to me like some English country pretty-boy, for some reason. I think it's the way he talks, or something- not too sure. He just radiates that idea. He's really courteous, and seems well-read.

And with the heat- I can so relate. It's insane! I can barely sleep at night.

Whoops, I think I wrote a bit too much this time. Okay, until next chapter!

starrynight04 chapter 21 . 6/17/2006
Thanks for the update!

I also recently tried to go and see Panic! At the Disco. But the cheapest tickets were a hundred bucks! I mean, who do they think they are? I went to see the Strokes and it only cost ten... sheesh...
Kanalily chapter 21 . 6/16/2006
Wow, that was a good chapter! I like it. I think it's funny how Skyla forces him to do everything by using her affection. It's strange. Oh! I know what it's like! It's a benign Debbie from the Addams Family Values and a smart, cute Fester!

Alrighty, sorry for that strange bit there...


P.S. Are they really snobs? I'm so sad to hear that. I heard that they were really nice. Hmm, maybe they had a fight earlier and were all sulky. Or maybe they really are assholes. Oh, and you're so lucky to have gone to their concert!
TornXAngel chapter 18 . 6/6/2006
OMG! I can't get over you're talent. This story is amazing. I can't wait to see where you go with it. YAY! Patrick and Sky! Finally. I love you're style. It makes everything feel so real! I'm sorry I didn't comment on you're last chapter. For some reason Ficpress didn't send me an alert. Thank you for sending me that e-mail! It made my day. Update soon!
MoriMorte chapter 18 . 6/6/2006
good chpt. keep up the good word

i wish u luck on your writing
JesterKing'sPawn chapter 17 . 6/5/2006
good chapter! can't wait to read the next one!
Zara chapter 18 . 6/3/2006
Aw. I was waiting for that. That was so cute. Please update soon!
MoriMorte chapter 16 . 5/31/2006
awsome good job

i wish u luck on your writing!
TornXAngel chapter 16 . 5/30/2006
OMG! This is such an amazing story. I love it. I can't believe that you wrote it and you're just out of high school!Please update soon! I'm going to be thinking about this story all night. Poor Patrick! I can't believe that happened to him! Yay for Skyla going to see him anyway! I can't wait to find out what happens next! Your grammar and spelling are amazing. I only found one mistake. It was in chapter eleven: This my sound weird, but I trust Frank.: It says my instead of may. That's it! do you know how amazing that is? Thank you for sharing this story! Are you planning on getting it published?

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