Reviews for Morgue of the Desert
JesterKing'sPawn chapter 16 . 5/30/2006
awsome chapter, more soon!
JesterKing'sPawn chapter 13 . 5/30/2006
awsome chapter!
Zara chapter 16 . 5/29/2006
Hurray for the update! I really want to see where you are going with this...
Flying With Fish chapter 16 . 5/29/2006
I feel so bad for Sky... And poor Patrick! I cannae wait to find out what will happen next... I just feel so bad for them... *goes off into a corner and is depressed for the two awesome characters...* Hope the next installment comes son! -Nam
MoriMorte chapter 15 . 5/19/2006
please update
Flying With Fish chapter 15 . 5/18/2006
I was really not expecting that. At all.

*goes and lays down to get out of the shock she's in* wow...

I'm too shocked for words.

Hope there's more soon. I HAVE to find out what happens now! -Nam
Zara chapter 15 . 5/18/2006
No...thats so sad! Why Patrick?
Flying With Fish chapter 14 . 5/17/2006
oh... *feels bad* Stupid vamps. anywho, great chapter. I really liked it alot. _ Hope there's more soon. -Nam
Flying With Fish chapter 13 . 5/16/2006
Yah! There's an update! *throws confette(sp?)* Anywho, I can't tell how I feel about Vince and the other wonder vamps... hum. Well, I'm not going to be slaughtered for rooting for Pat now will I? *waves a little flag with 'Pat' on it around* _

Hope there's more soon :D -Nam
JesterKing'sPawn chapter 12 . 5/11/2006
awsomness chapter, more chapters as soon as you can!
MoriMorte chapter 11 . 5/2/2006
awsome job

and patrick is stupid

i wish u luck on your writing!
JesterKing'sPawn chapter 11 . 5/1/2006
*pokes you in the middle of the forhead* great chappys! update son!
Zara chapter 11 . 4/29/2006
An interesting twist. I like it a lot. It will be fun to see what happens next. Update soon!
iglooey chapter 9 . 4/26/2006
Wow, this is a pretty interesting story, not at all like other vampire stories I've read. I love your kind of random descriptions and likeable characterizations. Very cool.

Um...I noticed that sometimes you're too suspenseful. I mean it's not much of a bad thing, but the reader is always wondering what is going on because you're talking about totally random stuff or you add completely unrelated scenes. Maybe this is your writing style, but yeah...

Other than that, your story is absolutely amazing and I really really really hope you'll update soon.
Flying With Fish chapter 9 . 4/25/2006
Wwoh! Yeah, scary vampires! _

I can't wait for more! This is seriously great. Gotta love the blood suckers. Plus I'm rooting for Vince all the way! WO HO!

Oh, I was a little confused though, at the end, when it said, 'I looked out the window towards Vince’s voice, but he wasn’t there. None of them were. The whole ridge was deserted except for the empty car.' Does this mean that Pat is gone too? O_o Anywho, I hope there's more soon,

-Nam
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