Reviews for Joyride
in theory chapter 1 . 3/27/2007
Flirty, and the last line was one of *those* that you remember.
Sadira chapter 1 . 6/13/2006
Alright, now I've read 2 of your poems and you're going on my favourites list. Arghh! You're so incredible at this it's almost painful. The images you create in this are some of the best I've ever read.
astral boy chapter 1 . 4/14/2006
this was sweet but potent (in a good way) which isn't too common, really. well done, it's different to the usual harshness you have, i think. maybe i'm wrong, but good work nonetheless.
Midnight In Eden chapter 1 . 4/12/2006
beautiful... just simply stunning imagery of two people and a moment.

the last two lines sum up the whole piece very nicely.

going on my favourites.