|Reviews for Gravity|
| she's not breathing chapter 1 . 4/12/2006
i love how nonsensical your work is at times but how beautiful it remains. i love the rhythm & internal rhyming in this. the beginning was so lovely. try & figure out the formatting, though (use that Quick Edit feature when you furst upload) because that was the most distracting bit. other than that, lovely.
| Vyvyan chapter 1 . 4/12/2006
Hmm...parts of this done't make sense to me like the first three lines. However, I adored "he raced to be slow." Very well done.
| Em0tionally UnStAbLe chapter 1 . 4/12/2006
Nice Poem... A lot of depth here, and it's simply amzing! Check out my pieces if you get a chance, Laterz!