Reviews for butterfly instincts
dark stars grace chapter 1 . 5/4/2006
so abstract, with fluttering imagery. and the title is wonderful as well. *
she wants revenge chapter 1 . 4/25/2006
gorgeous. i don't know how else to put it. effing beautiful
X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
Lovely poem.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
gorgeous. just..."she is flower-locked" is so amazing and perfect and

jesus, you make me incoherent.

* noelle
a lonely september chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
'flower-locked' 'winter air dissolving' 'butterfly instincts' i want to drown in your mind.
beti213 chapter 1 . 4/14/2006
makes me think of snow melting... and crocuses.I also like how "wonder" is centered in the format... I'll admit that I didn't completely understand this poem, but I think the language is beautiful.
astral boy chapter 1 . 4/14/2006
heh, this reminded me of "Corpse Bride". but maybe I read it too plainly. either way, it was nice.
Chemically Induced chapter 1 . 4/13/2006
beautiful imagery. "against the keylines" and "she is flower-locked" are my favorite parts. i loved the hinted notion that she may be trapped amongst some cold dead beauty. a fine poem.

love, .
AllyCred chapter 1 . 4/13/2006
I love it, very powerful and just beautiful!
forsakensmile chapter 1 . 4/13/2006
Just beautiful.
she's not breathing chapter 1 . 4/12/2006
love the ending, & also the way you use juxstaposition throughout this poem in a subtler way. beautiful.

kait
Aquafied chapter 1 . 4/12/2006
reminds me of prisons and butterflyes.

scintillates almostlike a magic trick

it makes me want to disappear
classic violet chapter 1 . 4/12/2006
oh god, this is gorgeous. just, simple gorgeous. amazing. you've captured so much in only 19 words. beautiful.
in theory chapter 1 . 4/12/2006
I think that last line is the only one I grasped, and that's because it's so unexpected. Beautiful thoughts appeared from that, abstract and concise. Loved it, keep up the great work.