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my god your amazing. Not only was your characterization and historical name spelling and facts correct... but they were well written in context! BRAVO! Very nice smut... very... very nice. There was one problem... well.. two... the first is that it is a one shot (no later instalments of a romance good smut story) and second... let me tell you from experience darling... as somone who enjoys gay sex... (unless you have had anal with a male lover) it is the most... amazing thing... and you had almost every detail described perfectly... but what gave away that you were a female writer is that after anal intercourse... when Apollo came inside the depths of Hyacinth... it just... like... had no mention of it after... but i can tell you that when you let someone (excuse me for being... blunt) cum inside your ass... it is the most nasty thing to get out... because it doesnt absorb into your body... you have to shit it out... and its like... not easy shit.. because your anus is sore from the actual sex so you have like... internal hemroids... i found this out from the 1st time i had sex and the guy didnt ask he just came... never again... pull out and/or use condom everytime...

other then that... you did amazing... amazing!

*adds to fave*

ps: would you want to co write something sometime? I would be honored :-D

loved this. :]

Very brilliant.

wow...what can i say? it was delicous. haha...very good. i loved it. i usually dont like guyxguy stuff but this? this is goin on my fav stories list

Wow. I loved it. Especially the end when Apollo shows up at the feast. Lol! Anyway, good job!

Rose Red

I like this! It's got a great balance of passion and humour and a storyline that flows. The Artemis-Hades-Apollo issues are FUNNY!

I like this almost as much as I like the Oasis one. I've read them both now and I must say you have a talent for lemon. I'd describe the effect on myself (and the people I have made read this), but I'd have to be rather crass. I shall spare you THAT and just tell you that I am a big fan of your work.

LOL! That was a great story!

Tight as a bow...you know how much that would actually hurt?yes, i know, pot calls kettle black, ever so black, blacker than , at least you managed some good metaphors along with your smut. i never -ut, believe me, in a few years it will be less about the smut and more about why you would rather explore the visceral raw sweaty realm of men's feelings for each other. imagine that. you've got potential, in all honesty i'd prefer more exploration of that world than the one where perfect orgasms (an almost unheard of phenomenon BTW) and hairless nubile males exist. try it some time. i'll be reading it too.

Oh yaoi. How I love thee. That was hot. It's not offen I browse fictionpress...the fanfic is more my stuff. But I'm glad I found this one:)

DM

So sexy! I loved it. You write very well. The footnotes at the bottom were very nice as well. It has been a while since I've reviewed my mythology, so the notes were helpful.

the last line is my favorite ;)

*grins happily* Girl, you are an awesome lemon writer. Such lovely smut... I have a hard time just writing a limey scene. ; And congrats! I'm not 18 yet either! Gimme another year and four months, though... I'm going to go look at your other stuff now. Later!

-laughs- Well I'm not eighteen either and yet my yaoi addiction is as prominent as ever. And really writing lemons is too much fun. Anyways, this story is great. I love your yaoi-fied adaptations of classical myths.