Reviews for My Rival
the girl with the voice chapter 1 . 8/25/2006
FREAKIN AWESOME! dont ask...i just felt like puttin that...its really good.
HAHAHA! and that why hes called JELLO! i think we should call him celery... cuz i like the word jello..
Glowing Aura chapter 1 . 4/15/2006
LOL, clever! Too true. Well, rivals are usually the ones who can't defend themsleves but they talk like they can. Sweet, sweet, awesome job.
Orion Demasecus chapter 1 . 4/14/2006
Interesting poem. Anyways who is your rival? i would really like to know, although it will probably have little meaning since i probably don't know the guy.