i likey this story. :]

GRAHH! It's getting tons better, but words and letters are missing. Or rearranged.

'cha.

Darnit, she should just take the guy! It's stupid not to.

Jesus, I would totally go for him! I love crazy guys! I need someone who can keep up with my energy. XP

This is so adorable!

You cannot make him end up with megan! Thats just wrong on so many levels.. i mean its not even a question if he should end up with megan! What are u thinking.. megans just the drama added to the story.. -.-

How can u not mind with who hes going to end up with *gasp* what if megan turns out to be a total slut and maybe shes even in love with eric and hasnt noticed it until a week after shes dating max!

megan!

And pls updated again pf its been forever they are already off to college and probably gradutaing when ur posting again :P

jk pls updated again or at least let us know ur still alive!

go Ellie

It's been a year and a half, my dear, but I just know everyone's still hoping you haven't abandoned this. So be a darling and continue, will you?

Oh, and Ellie all the way, of course (if it makes you feel better, have Megan end up with Dex. This way, everyone's happy, 'kay?)

All the best,

Lizzie

All for Ellie! Megan is a no no!

Ellie!

Actually, I would want to have him ending up with Megan, but i feel that her character is not developed enough in the story for that to happen. She never interacts with Max, what she loves about him seems to be his spontaneous and incredulous proclaimations of love for Ellie. I think if Megan and Max get together, Max is not going to do that for her. His desperate love for Ellie is what brings out that side of Max. Therefore, I declare that Max and Ellie should get together.

On a side note, maybe Eirc should be requited with his love who just happens to be Megan, the girl who will change him from "player" to "true lover"!

Btw, about the story, i think it could use some editing, correct some grammar mistakes, develop some scenes, the setting and characters (ie. Becca, James) blah blah... But i think it is absolutely INCREDIBLE how you keep the reader hooked! There is something about the story, though simple in narration, that keeps you reading.

Great Job so far! UPDATE!

ELLIE!

ELLIE ELLIE ELLIE!

Please please please let him end up with Ellie!

I mean, I like Megan and all, but kflasjfkd jsdalk;j ;fk;j

I LOVE ELLIE! She's amazingly funny and really cute with Max.

So Ellie! I'm for her all the way.

:]

Wow, I realized that I sound retarded.

I hate megan. . you cant ruin the story by putting them together. ELLIE FTW!

Ellie ofcourse

please ups-date I LOVE this

I vote Ellie :)

Ella! damn it! update! aww man... *twiddles thumbs* please?