This was really sad and i can really feel the pain of your loss. I really love the very last stanza it really appeals to me and just brought so many images to my mind, well done for writing this, it's so powerful and beautiful!

"Very emotional! Bravo! I feel your pain." Quiet Man

wow. this is...good. better than good. no words to describe the emotion thats pouring out of this poem. none of the words in the english language are good enough.