Reviews for Visions of Pearls
account not in use chapter 1 . 4/15/2006
honestly, it's what we all want, something to hold onto. Fantastic ideas in this, they grabbed onto me form the first line.
Jason J. Ross chapter 1 . 4/14/2006
Wow! A great snapshot of your personal experience! Great read! You're one of the best!
Scrunchy chapter 1 . 4/14/2006
I like the poem, 'tis a good expression, a little over-metaphorical for my liking, I think, but that doesn't stop it being very good."to a wall of photographs (fallen)"my favourite line )
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 4/13/2006
beacon...i think you mean bacon. but beacon, that would be interesting. i like this 'cause it's so true and dripping with honesty and personal emotions of course. beautiful imagery too. nice work.
x-the wretched chapter 1 . 4/13/2006
Aww, that was really good. The part about the old man really made me feel sorry for him and the ending just does it for me. Gorgeous.
A Pin One chapter 1 . 4/13/2006
I want you to know that you will always be my favorite poet. I really did like this so very much. Please keep it up I always like reading you work.

Jesse
Just Luke Staden chapter 1 . 4/13/2006
i like it. a very good peice of poetry as always. keep it up!
Maisha Mafuriko chapter 1 . 4/13/2006
This writing is absolutely stunning!

Goodness if mist hasn't arisen in my eyes on more than one occassion while taking in this writing you have penned.

Maisha Connie
Carp chapter 1 . 4/13/2006
It's like I can really see into yourself as I was reading this poem. Nice.
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