Very well done thusfar, keep up the good work. I particularly enjoy some of the descriptives that you used.

I Like,I Lust, I Love!Please Update Soon!

I really like this. :)

wow...i really,really like ur story...

it first caught my eye cos i have been reading stories about werewolves recently and i wanted to try urs out and it was great.

i love ur plot and i like that the magical creatures arent perfect in ur makes it seem more realistic and easier to relate to.

anyways keep writing pls update soon!

I liked this first chapter, its very interesting. I love werewolves and all that stuff, I am actually writing a story about a werewolf right now except kinda opposite from your story. In my case, my first person narrative is from the human character, lol. Your story caught my eye because it sounded similiar to mine and it definitely didn't disappoint me! Anyway, i would love to see where this story goes, it sounds very interesting. Good luck with all your writing!

~E~

Wow, I LOVE this! Ah, I can't wait for more. WIll you be writing more soon? :D

The concept of this story is a nice turnaround from the usual cliche of the werewolf being the guy and the girl being human- I love the perspective you've picked :)

You did have a slight spelling mistake:"I might have noticed that the pendent he was wearing... " The word is "Pendant", not "pendent".

Either way, nice work!

Erisah

I love this story. Your style is really natural and realistic. I feel like I'm living in it.

Kali

This would be perfect if "Simon" could see the proverbial light at the end of the tunnel...

Ugh, high school drama. So annoying, and yet so satisfying. I don't think that Vincent knows anything about his cousin hunting Jess. Anyway, you should update this a lot more. I really like it, but I forgot about it because it hadn't been updated lately.

This story is very good, i would love to read more of this story. please update more soon.

Thank You!

Ja-Ne _

She's slowly building herself up for a particularly bad mess. ::))

Poor chica. Vincent is a cutie, but I don't know. He seems to be genuine but he could just be a very good actor for all we know. I'm surprised at how Simon reacted last time... and the fact that there wasn't an attack all that time. Could it have something to do with that necklace thing. Maybe some kind of control... Hmm. Anyway, update soon.

Yeah! Another good chapter...I was really wondering what Jess was going to do...And Vincent telling her that he liked her...gosh, I feel sorry for Jess(and Vincent as well...). I'm not sure if he knows or not, but Vincent seems like a nice guy..._ Anyways, good chapter again, please update soon!

-Black Cat Bastet

Hey, sorry for being so terribly late. Totally my fault really. First it was the 3month camp, then it was coming back to tons of story alerts that kinda made me lazy, then I got bored, so I started again. And I have to say, I'm glad that I came back to your work. Still a very good job. However, that part where Jess was asked if she liked Vincent, her monologue had too many no's this and that. 8 or so, yeah, a bit too much. So...um, ok. That's it. But nice chapters even so.