Reviews for Rage
SwitchVale chapter 1 . 11/14/2006
That definitely gets the feeling of rage across. Sometimes there's nothing complicated about rage, the simplicity really fit well.
AchtungBabyAchtung chapter 1 . 4/18/2006
angry andrew rears his head again! i like the bold as emphisis. works nice;y. iz x
Chelseamuffin chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
... I don't like rage. It makes me do strange things that only hurt me more than anyone else. Yep. That's it. Ah well, still a great poem, I loved the opening lines. Keep it up!
simply meg chapter 1 . 4/15/2006
scary! *runsawayintoacorner* Write On!
Olivine chapter 1 . 4/14/2006
i liked the simplicity of the words in the short lines, and the small bit of repitition. it had a nice impact on the poem. and i think the first three lines, "look me in the eye and tell me WHY?" really layed out the anger the reader would feel, reading on. awesome, awesome.

keep on writing ~~Wintertigress-::-

ps-thankyou for the review, im glad you liked my poem :)