|Reviews for Living Alone|
| SomeRandomScribbles chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
I like the way you focus on an individual in the verses, but make the lyrics more general and open in the chorus - this allows the listener/reader to feel personally involved as well as being able to focus on one story.
The way you incorperate small details - "music loud and kettle warm" - amongst larger ideas really brings them to life and adds layers and variety to this piece.
Occasionally the rhymes seem a little forced in this piece - for example, "he gets intruded and not" doesn't seem quite right.
Overall, a great piece - the flow and lanugage are both really good :)