|Reviews for FeAr|
| All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 9/13/2006
O. Excellent job on this one. Very good. Creepy, but very well done creepyness...if you know what I
| Femme de Dieu chapter 1 . 4/22/2006
Ashelin, this is very nicely done. Great rythm in the rhyming. And the overall "feeling" is so "real."
Keep writing, kiddo!
| NO LONGER USING chapter 1 . 4/15/2006
that is kind of creepy...
| ode to a firefly chapter 1 . 4/14/2006
Really interesting concepts you have here. My only critiques would be that "breath" should have an "e" on the end, and you probably shouldn't capitalize the "A" in "fear." It looks kind of strange...at least to me. P Keep writing!
| Cloudsinthesky chapter 1 . 4/14/2006
Your words are very true, good poem.
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 4/14/2006
In a way, I’m afraid of nothing/Nothing can scare me/But in a way, I fear all/Because it all I do not see - Great perspective on those emotions. I can really relate to this. The keys to the car/heart was a strong comparison as well.
I can relate so much to your words. The idea that everything you SHOULD want in life is frightening and you aren't really sure how to go about understanding the greater vibe of it all. Well done, I applaud your honesty and conclusions - being afraid of nothing is a bit frightening in and of itself. Keep up the good work.