Reviews for Flawless Victory
Licee chapter 1 . 9/12/2006
i really like this the straight forwardness and the conviction
Peter Harrison chapter 1 . 6/22/2006
I really like this actually... took a few minutes to understand what you were trying to convey in the poem, I felt that it was a little off topic for a couple lines, but reading it again, they all seem to fall into place. I especially like the ending, I'm a big fan of dramatic endings to poetry. I'm adding this to my favourites!

P.S. check out "Strange Things". You might like it.
Lisa Parry chapter 1 . 4/15/2006
The views put across in the poem were ones I had yet to consider. The positive tone in 'Yet the arguments only make it stronger/ The love to get each other back will grow' made the first verse the poem's strongest part, as a way to prove you really cared about the other person. Good poem. :)