Reviews for palmistry
Lady Fingers chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
this is really awesome

you should listen to the song

fatalist palmistry by why?

yes..that's the band name...why?


I appreciate the love/lust in this

the pull between the two and the temptation always lingering
Her Wishing Well chapter 1 . 4/2/2007
beautifully written, i like how each line says so much in so few words
mostly water chapter 1 . 6/6/2006
Unready chapter 1 . 5/3/2006
kinda reminds me of lyrics from a psychedelic 60's band in a sick way. nice one.
sunday night sky chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
lovely imagery, i love the theme. i really like the half rhymes: 'her like will be short/ (wrinkles few)/ teeth marks./ salty residue' beautifully worded. great piece!
astral boy chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
beautiful, again. but i read it more than once because i saw differently at the beginning than i did at the end, something you make me do a lot. which is great.
gnimrodd chapter 1 . 4/29/2006
m.. the opposite of delicious. (for the character) i really like it.
White Tea and Ginger chapter 1 . 4/26/2006
love writing.
My New Pen Name chapter 1 . 4/25/2006
Very cool, seductive. Great analogies and play with words.
she wants revenge chapter 1 . 4/25/2006
beautiful. i always love the short ones with the amazing imagery.

the gypsy's word saysher life will be short(wrinkles few)

brilliant lines. i loved every second. kinda reminds me of my friend's vindication for smoking _ great read
insomnia in dreamland chapter 1 . 4/23/2006
painful and lovely.

"the gypsy's words says her life will be short"

that line was so intense. it explains so much in the poem too.

i loved it.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/22/2006
love that last line.. great piece
X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
Love how this was written, and I really like the last line. Wonderful work, write on.
AllyCred chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
WOW...This is so amazing, so much energy and fire in your words, well done, this is perfect, so pure!
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
"love's secret is lust"

beautiful, beautiful. that last line is a killer.

~* noelle
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