|Reviews for palmistry|
| Lady Fingers chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
this is really awesome
you should listen to the song
fatalist palmistry by why?
yes..that's the band name...why?
I appreciate the love/lust in this
the pull between the two and the temptation always lingering
| Her Wishing Well chapter 1 . 4/2/2007
beautifully written, i like how each line says so much in so few words
| mostly water chapter 1 . 6/6/2006
AH! that is SO BEAUTIFUL! I WISH I COULD FAVE DAMMIT DAMMIT DAMMIT!
| Unready chapter 1 . 5/3/2006
kinda reminds me of lyrics from a psychedelic 60's band in a sick way. nice one.
| sunday night sky chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
lovely imagery, i love the theme. i really like the half rhymes: 'her like will be short/ (wrinkles few)/ teeth marks./ salty residue' beautifully worded. great piece!
| astral boy chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
beautiful, again. but i read it more than once because i saw differently at the beginning than i did at the end, something you make me do a lot. which is great.
| gnimrodd chapter 1 . 4/29/2006
m.. the opposite of delicious. (for the character) i really like it.
| White Tea and Ginger chapter 1 . 4/26/2006
| My New Pen Name chapter 1 . 4/25/2006
Very cool, seductive. Great analogies and play with words.
| she wants revenge chapter 1 . 4/25/2006
beautiful. i always love the short ones with the amazing imagery.
the gypsy's word saysher life will be short(wrinkles few)
brilliant lines. i loved every second. kinda reminds me of my friend's vindication for smoking _ great read
| insomnia in dreamland chapter 1 . 4/23/2006
painful and lovely.
"the gypsy's words says her life will be short"
that line was so intense. it explains so much in the poem too.
i loved it.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/22/2006
love that last line.. great piece
| X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
Love how this was written, and I really like the last line. Wonderful work, write on.
| AllyCred chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
WOW...This is so amazing, so much energy and fire in your words, well done, this is perfect, so pure!
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
"love's secret is lust"
beautiful, beautiful. that last line is a killer.