Reviews for Bear to Lose
Damaged chapter 1 . 5/27/2006
Gorgeous poem! I especially loved the final two lines: "Can't bear to lose / Anymore tears to you" That really invoked strong emotions! Excellent job!
Abby Sequioa chapter 1 . 5/7/2006
I like it! who's it about? K_ _ _ _? or?
InspirASIAN chapter 1 . 4/18/2006
OMG...Are you okay? This is really good! But are you okay?
Abby chapter 1 . 4/16/2006
aw, I like it. keep writing!
Sarah chapter 1 . 4/15/2006
This is really nice and well written! I hope you feel better Jordyn! See you in 7 days or so!
Jeffro the Clown chapter 1 . 4/15/2006
I like it a lot! Nice job! I don't exactly understand who it's about though! You can fill me in later! I'm confused about stuff right now too actually...I'm not entirely sure what to do anymore...well, ttyl

Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 4/15/2006
Oh Jo! What's going on? This poem is so emotional. You should email me sometime, I would love to hear from you. Keep writing!