"while the world tumbles on recklessly,"

that's so pretty.

great work! if only i had that ability to standstill while the world rushes by... great poem, it had me relax a little :)

I can't hum, and it kills me. This is good; I liked the last stanza best.

bittersweet like nostalgia. it has a childhood simplicity to it that i can't help but love.

This is a sweet poem. The tone of it is young, but not childish. Very well written, good word choice.