Reviews for matter
Aimee Raven chapter 1 . 5/14/2006
Wow. I *love* the beginning...the whole poem is great, but the beginning is especially so...such a portrayal of time and mortality...love and war...stunning...it left me very wide-eyed and I had to re-read it twice...kudos to you! Love, Mia
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 4/28/2006
That is gorgeous. Such beautiful soothing words, and it makes this rhythmic cascading poem. Wonderful. I especially like all the imagery with sand and water. It reminds me of one big beach. Keep writing! :)
bright horizon splash chapter 1 . 4/24/2006
beautiful poem. lulling imagery, and the end is power - true. well done. *
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 4/24/2006
wow, i love that image. cascading grains... the last two lines were simply breath taking. awesome work

keep writing!
Raiyune chapter 1 . 4/18/2006
Wow.. This poem is so incredibly profound and beautiful. The first part reminds me of a book I read for English class, A Separate Peace by John Knowles. And I love the ending. It kind of makes me think of the last note of a song - even though the song is over, the finality of the last note makes the melody linger on in your thoughts. Wonderfully done! :D
classic violet chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
God this is gorgeous.

"What has not changedis that I can quote myself truly in meaning / that I cannot make time slow long enough / to build and bring light to new worlds without you / before all the galaxies spin to dust / spin to sand"

Absolutely stunning.
chaos called creation chapter 1 . 4/15/2006
gah, you just kept pushing and pushing to this to the point that it became too deep for me to handle ]P