Reviews for Sanctuary
tesa131313 chapter 1 . 12/9/2006
Incredibly strong and heavy on emotion. Jawdropping really.
Windup Hopping Lederhosen chapter 1 . 8/9/2006
"(As if raping the truth changes it.)" I love that line. You're really an amazing writer, you realize this, right?
Consolation chapter 1 . 8/3/2006
Wow, this poem had me rereading it at least three times. It was so powerful and intense that it gave me shivers when i read it! The analogies are incredible and imagery is near perfect! Please keep writing!
BlueWolfGirl chapter 1 . 7/27/2006
This is a poem right? The writting isn't bad the poem was quiet enjoable.

Oh and thanks for the review.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 5/1/2006
Not only did you use second-person narrativ but you also crossed religous and political commentary into one fantastic poem - I love it. The lines flow more fluidly each time I read and the lines become more haunting, more precise with each reading. It is brillant, fucked up beautiful and dangerously refreshing (I've rarely read something on this sight that has juggled such issues without being all too "in your face" for my liking). It was a poem, to simply state it.

* Noelle
addie pray chapter 1 . 4/26/2006
Beautiful. Fucked by the church feeling to it. Elegant and intelligent, I would really like to read more of you. Flows time after time reading it.
simply meg chapter 1 . 4/15/2006
Wow... that was extremely powerful! Nice job... Write On!