Reviews for Seasons Change
Stomac chapter 1 . 6/29/2006
"Love lies bleeding on the floor"

That is definately perfect... And you're going to enter my favourite Authors:)..
SilverAndFlames chapter 1 . 5/2/2006
very emotive. Painfully acute to you and others. Well done.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/23/2006
It isn't your bet, but it is good.. i like the format and all the questiong.. its definately something most (including me) can relate to.. I might try and keep the line length consisten though the short to long to short lines bothered me (but thats just me..lol)
AllyCred chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
I really liked this and well done, writing something this personal is hard and can go very wrong, but you've done it with ease and i just hope letting it out here has eased your pain slightly, i know exactly how you feel. Well done!
Annaece's Forsaken Corpse chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
OMG,I love the chorse to this song! I tried to write something similar to this but it sucked. He, he I love it.
queenvixta chapter 1 . 4/16/2006
Whoa this is so powerful! Beautifully written! Great job! V x
method acting chapter 1 . 4/15/2006
Cliche. You have emotion and flow, so drape it about with lavish mystery. Go further indepth.
Incandescent Dreamer chapter 1 . 4/15/2006
Amazing poem, I really liked it. I loved the use of the different kinds of fonts; they really added a lot. Great job! -*-Incandescent Dreamer -*-