Reviews for Tuned Into Memories chapter 1 . 6/8/2006
This seems a little disjointed to be fiction. It looked as if you were trying to write a poem in prose style (if that makes any sense). I'm not sure what to tell you as far as how to change it so it reads better. Either make the sentences complete sentences to make it prose or keep them the way they are and maybe take out a few words to make it a poem. I don't know. That's just my suggestions. Keep writing! :)
SKATENaked-BlindReaper chapter 1 . 4/15/2006
Loved it. Especially since it's a worldwide feeling everyone can identify with. And thanks for the review. :)