Reviews for Your Beatings
BloodRedPoliche chapter 1 . 10/22/2008
I'm sorry you had to go through that. It's well written, and I really like it.
Ryan Cummins chapter 1 . 11/30/2006
That was an amazing display of emotion. I wish I could be so true and honest. Too bad it is so sad and true. I loved the flow of emotion through the whole work.
Cloudsinthesky chapter 1 . 5/14/2006
very sad, I liked the flow of emotion though. Good job.
criti-sized chapter 1 . 5/12/2006
This is a sad true poem that happens to many people. I really liked it and thought the emotion that you put into it was real.
Lady of Spring Rain chapter 1 . 5/7/2006
That's a sad poem. You said it was about a guy you dated, that's really sad. But powerful, very powerful. And I thank you for reviewing my story.
myheartiswaypastbeating chapter 1 . 4/15/2006
I like this alot, tells a point of view I understand. Like how you finished it especially.