|Reviews for porcelain doll|
| Needa S chapter 1 . 4/29/2006
Don't think I have ever read anything quite like this. Well thought out piece. Awesome write.
| The Fourth Fate chapter 1 . 4/21/2006
I love writing about porcelain. I just... yeah I can really really really relate. Most people think porcelain is just creepy (and I do, too) but I think it also has a lot of symbolism. It comes up all (all all all all) the time in my writing (most of it I don't post, though) and so I feel like I know exactly what you're talking (haha or writing) about. I love finding people on fictionpress that are easy to relate to.
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 4/16/2006
Hauntingly well done. This creates a startlingly vivid image for a haiku. Excellent work.
| laughter at the funeral chapter 1 . 4/16/2006
you really have captured the beauty and the blankness of a porcelain doll with just enough words...very good job on this...i have reflections of this poem in my pieces "flawed perfection" and "pink blushons and piano dreams"...pls do check them out...
| breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 4/16/2006
i love the last line cause it's so true and almost symbolic. nice work.
| Frore chapter 1 . 4/16/2006
Very, very nice haiku. It's hard to write a good one of those, and you pulled it off spectacularly! )