Reviews for Helpless
sreddi chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
a quality poem but i am confused as to whether u r the right person to write this. As in sure u may be down but i figured that a loner, e.g old V. might have written this. If this is how u really feel never forget u r never alone when u have an indian for a friend
Raynboww chapter 1 . 7/20/2006
This is how I felt through most of my teenage years... Nobody wanting me to do anything with them... But I sense this hopefulness that one day you will be excepted... And that's how I felt... Good poem I love it!
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 4/26/2006
Very emotional, well expressed. good work

keep writing!
BeholderOfImagination chapter 1 . 4/18/2006
Ok this is one I feel I can relate to. Sad smiles, but smiles nonetheless. Its good.
Olivine chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
another good one, lol. somehow, i really liked the line "all real. tinged with fake" awesome.

keep on writing ~~Wintertigress-::-