|Reviews for Vulture|
| luv me like no other chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
i like how your wrote fetal position. it's a big image there, and your imagery is awesome.
| RoraSephone chapter 1 . 7/15/2006
Wow. Good use of imagery here. I like the metaphor, it's very vivid.
| GirlxAnachronism chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
i liked the imagery (sp?) in this. and i like where you use parethesi for the words fetal job
| BlackDreamLily chapter 1 . 4/16/2006
haha- I was amused.
| delete this page 109231 chapter 1 . 4/16/2006
a realy good poem. excellent stuff