Reviews for i made a promise
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 12/19/2007
"and/maybe i am meant to be broken inside."

that last sentence is so beautiful. it's the perfect ending to such a powerful piece.
cardiolysis chapter 1 . 4/22/2006
I must say I love your work, parentheses and all. And this... there's a lot of emotion in this. It connects.
polka dots and addictions chapter 1 . 4/19/2006
love the way the lines finish in the middle of a sentence, and the bracketed words really get the pain out well,holding a deeper meaning to the open ones. The last two lines are fantastic as well.

_beXie_
Annaece's Forsaken Corpse chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
O, I know the feeling. It can be hard keeping promises, the last to lines are great.
randompoetry chapter 1 . 4/16/2006
The ending really makes the poem. Great job.