Reviews for Chasing Princes
ABC chapter 2 . 2/21/2009
Hey that was pretty easy

the guy in the barn is obviously

the prince-

am i right?

Still, cool to find out how they fall in love :)
Shumi chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
Nice Start!

Bit like the Cinderella plotline though?
xVocalFuelx chapter 19 . 2/11/2009
I really enjoy reading your story. I love how you bring in aspects from other fairy tales, but everything goes all wrong. Your story is really funny, and very well written. I find it very refreshing and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
XxAmberRomancexX chapter 19 . 12/1/2008
Wow, this is one of the most entertaining and refeshing fairytales I've read in a long time. I'm wondering if I'm right in guessing who the prince is...but I'll wait.

However. The last update was in March? I hope that just means you've been suffering from writer's block, and now, in December, you'll miraculously recover and give us another chapter?

:)

Anywho, continue this please! Don't listen to what idiots out there are saying about plagiarism. This is definitely not plagiarism and it is definitely something you shouldn't abandon.
ze chapter 19 . 11/11/2008
hey i love this story, please update soon!
Written chapter 19 . 11/3/2008
oh boy, you must continue this!
Alteng chapter 2 . 8/27/2008
It still says much about Talia that she keeps marks for how many times she cleans the stables. She is rather a little Cinderella type girl, isn't she.

It is odd that the stepsisters want her mother's wedding gown. I wonder why.

The description of the servant quarters was good. I like the bit about the light. Of course, being the nocturnal being that I am, I would enjoy this.

It is a wonder that the Madame keeps any help by the way she treats them. I would think that Maggie would be the only to stay because of her dedication ot Talia. Walton sounds like a fun guy there, and no wonder he works under these conditions.
Alteng chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
Sorry that it has taken so long to get to this. I have had a bad spring and summer. Busy, you know.

Anyway, I find the chapter a little confusing. I am a sucker for continuity. Smack me. Anyway, am I to take it that the sisters are stepsisters? After all, they are older.

Madame is looking for a new husband? That's bigotry if she doesn't kill off the first one first, you know.

Okay, enough of my complaints. Talia sounds like a fun girl, maybe not the brightest, but she is fun. I don't know if it is lack of intelligence that keeps her to her routine of cleaning the stables and keeping track of it, but it does say a lot about ehr character.

The stranger has issues as well, but I am certain that will come to light later on. I do wonder why he was sleeping in hay, unless he likes that kind of thing. I have characters that go for that kind of thing.
Kanna-sama chapter 19 . 8/23/2008
Yay, I loved this last - LONG - chapter. I know how you feel about 'Ella Enchanted.' It's my second favorite book of Levine's, right after The Two Sisters of Bamarre. I watched the preview of Ella Enchanted, saw that Anne Hathaway was playing Ella, and knew it was going to be awful. I saw the end of it on accident because my friend's siblings were watching it. I was, needless to say, disgusted.

Anyway, I love this story. :) It makes me smile and laugh, which is a very good combination, haha.

Can't wait for the next chapter! Ciaos!
alycat722 chapter 19 . 6/23/2008
oh. my. goodness. i've waited for so long for an update! i'm so glad that i did not give up on you. this chapter was truly amazing!

it was definitely worth the wait, however, i would appreciate it if there was not such a long gap in between this and the next chapter. keep up the good work! :)
Sekugi chapter 19 . 6/12/2008
I loved that riddle! I really like your story, so keep it up!
Sekugi chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
Sometimes cliche is good. I like it a lot!
lecase19 chapter 19 . 4/28/2008
Woot! Great update... :D
I Murder on Impulse chapter 19 . 4/4/2008
nice
random2one chapter 19 . 4/4/2008
Aww! This is such a cute story! It's funny too! I just managed to finish reading all your chapters up to date. They're really good! Good job on so far! Update soon!:]
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