Reviews for Contempt
delete this page 109231 chapter 1 . 5/3/2006
and I have a superiority complex! any way it was a great poem - probably my favourite of yours at the moment
babybubbledragon chapter 1 . 4/22/2006
wow, this was amazing. Really, really expressive.
Poppy chapter 1 . 4/18/2006
woah, i didn't realise you got this angry. you learn something new every day :P very powerful and strong, phrased very well, it conveys your emotion very well
AchtungBabyAchtung chapter 1 . 4/18/2006
Repackaged, and now returned

love that line. and the whole thing actually. iz x
simply meg chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
wow... where did this anger come from? nice poem... I see it's words wrapped with anger... I wonder, for who?

Nice work. Hope to read something else of yours later:) Write On!

Olivine chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
very...bitter? i think the words 'snorting your breaths' and of course, the line before that made me realize the bitterness of the poem. you did a really good job on this. (again, i feel like 'good' is such a weak describer)

keep on writing ~~Wintertigress-::-
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
Powerful! Good job; write on!