|Reviews for This Way Of Life|
| O.r.i.g.i.n.a.l.isn't.My.style chapter 1 . 5/1/2006
...The story of my life...
I like this poem(gah, like is so overrused...) Back to the poem. Wow, very true. Great perspective. These are great lines: These peoples way of lifeThey all just sing their songOut of tune and out of luckAnd again, I like the last lines where you say:So I’ll just keep on rhymingHoping one day they’ll finally seeThis way of life they’re livingIsn’t working out for me… Actually, the whole thing was to my liking. Good job. BravoSidenote: A lot of your poems are so...G.O.O.D- How do you do it? You're a brilliant and an exceptional writer, just to tell you ;)
| xoxoMizzatxoxo chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
another awesome poem
| EvT chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
I rather like this piece. ) The middle part didn't really rhyme though, but the beginning and the end flowed pretty smoothly. )
| Infection chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
This was really good. The way the poem flowed was superb. The rhyme also worked well.