Reviews for Walking Away
Travis C. Eckert chapter 1 . 6/27/2006
Seems like rebellion is what this is about, which I am sure it is.
Aquafied chapter 1 . 4/18/2006
i went on a walk today, it was refreshing

but instead of away in my life, i have coped with the non-existant escape right now

isnt it odd when everything is lovely, yet you feel so suffocated. odd, odd.
Arichos chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
I love the determined tone you take with this poem. Its really different, and speaks to me really well. Once again, great job Mez.
Archipelago chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
I like the theme but it doesn't rhyme like those other two. I'm pretty sure I've never read this one before, but I so don't read everything you submit(because you update so much I'd have to neglect my sweet homework. ) :)
SayIt'sWrong chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
Hm...I don't think I've read this one before, I think I would remember...anywho great piece! I can relate to this one a lot and it is very well written. Lovely poem! Vx
SeaVoi chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
What you’re saying is very cool and people can really relate. However try to word it with out “I” and the poem will have a big “WOW” lol, my English teacher Mrs. Bifferet has been yelling at me for it. I am so happy you posted, I missed your writing.