Reviews for In Your Eyes
Abby Sequioa chapter 1 . 6/1/2006
this is beautiful. I think everyone's felt like this at one time or another. I LOVE the last few lines. the flow is great, the rhyming awesome... it's just an amazing poem in general!
Aquafied chapter 1 . 4/18/2006
very ryhming. but everyone judges

even if they deny itfirst reactions can always be changed later into first smilesyay

wow, awfully enthusiastic for me
Arichos chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
Wow. Puts you right into the thoughts of some random person. Awesome. Has an edge to it, which just adds to the awesomness of your writing. Sumthin is wrong with my comp, and i can't review your other poem, A world of our imagination, so here it is:

Very fantasy elemented, beautiful picture painted here. I'm gonna copy this one day, and make draw what i see, and somehow send it to you. Love it!
Archipelago chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
I'm loving your rhymes right now. This was especially cool because we all've thought about this before(at least I have)
SayIt'sWrong chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
Another great poem! This one flows really well and the rhyming is really good. Beautiful piece, well done! Vx
xRayne chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
This was good, keep it up!
SeaVoi chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
I hate when people just assume things it really sucks, I like this poem.