|Reviews for Marked For Discount|
| Peter C chapter 1 . 4/18/2006
I do not dare to eat a peach, but I shall wear white flannel trousers, and walk upon the beach.
There's a lot of crap on this site to which you do not contribute. Kudos to you!
| Atelophobia chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
I love this, the way you use repetition and talk about each chef all fit in nicely, and the effect is a really, really well-written piece. (:
| Written chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
The bit about the skin torn off sounds almost gory. I guess canned peaches will not be on the menu tonight at my apartment!
Anyway, very nice work with this story. It's a little bit funny in a weird way. Reads experimental.