|Reviews for polaroid snapshots of a summer breeze|
| sunday night sky chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
i love the enjambement in this - it keeps the flow smooth and interesting. really interesting metaphors 'trampled by sunlight'. great piece.
| Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
"fingers of mine can’t seem to stop wandering into the hungry eyes of strangers." - brilliant lines. this is really pretty and has great flow.