Reviews for Claustrophobia chapter 1 . 9/30/2008
This one's great.

"Where the water is clear,

I can wash off my sin,

And maybe then,

A new life can begin."

Those lines totally hit me in the face, along with the final lines. The song sounds alive, the story of it is awesome (in my books)... Yeah... I really enjoyed reading.


Keep writing :)
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
Great job! Write on!