I love this. The whole poem was simple extrodinary, but according to the other reviews, no one else sees it. I'm glad some one finally appreciates who we are- we are everything, nothing, and the world.

Well, from the looks of your lookup, you don't like people on this site, yet you post stuff, knowing what you're doing, even more than others. I guess that makes you a hypocrite, but I won't say more 'cause I'm scared of you...

Really strong poem. It had good flow and only someone with any knowledge would have understood the lines you wrote. It's obvious that this is good, and the rythming scheme was almost perfect, which many find hard to do. The context of the poem and the topic can make it easier and harder, and even if you think nothing of me, I really liked your poem.

Dynamic Equilibrium

I like this but I want to know what a lynchpin and a rutabaga are.

alex PS: i wouldn't suggest using words that no one could possibly know.

Hey this was cool. Different kinda ending than I was thinking there'd be but still cool...

Greyfox