Reviews for Five Men
Stars.Shining chapter 1 . 3/17/2009
Incredible! I really loved this. Wonderful description! I wish the 5th man had a special sentence that started out "He is a . . ." like the others. But other than that, this was phenomenal! :)
Salkiethia chapter 1 . 6/25/2007
Really good writing for the first five men, but I think the bit about the last one could be stronger. It's a little too twisted to understand easily.
account not in use chapter 1 . 4/26/2006
some typos in the last paragraph, they made me think I was cray-zay...beautiful story, it made my heart jump around.