|Reviews for James and Val Yin and Yin|
| Elizabeth Bilberry chapter 1 . 4/18/2006
This poem leaves me with a wistful feeling. Other's lives are too perfect, if you ask me. Wonderful imagery as always. Take care and keep writing.
| xoxoMizzatxoxo chapter 1 . 4/18/2006
Woah. Amazing. I loved the second to the last line.