|Reviews for Smooth as Silk|
| Vagabond Ace chapter 1 . 5/24/2006
I've been meaning for some time to review these works, and i guess I'll start here:
I want to tell you I like this poem. Because its good. It has its own sort of rhythm, I think. The poet that I am applauds you, but I don't like it. Thats of course, a personal preference. I'd never make you dance the gallows dance. But then, we already had this discussion.
Upload more, my love. You've not put anything up in far too long.
| ellinikolouloudi chapter 1 . 4/18/2006
I love it! it paints a perfect picture in my mind
| Plastic Roses Never Die chapter 1 . 4/18/2006
ooh. i love the silk, it really brings a mood to this. this is such a flowing poem, not only in the rhythem of the words, but in the words themselves. silp, slik, shrugged, and grace are all "smooth" words. For some reason i imagine this in a grove, and "my love" is a fairy child, and so is the narator. great great great, this is going on my favorites list.