It's probably just me but I love the sadism you apply in your writing. For instance when I read the last few lines of this one it just made me think "That's awesome" though obviously the situation was not. I believe what I'm trying to say is the suspense you put into your poetry enhanced by the blunt surprising endings makes for a very good read.

~Tyer

Well articulated. Very nice.

emoyions can often get in the way of writing, let alone speaking. then how come the best poetry is the most emotional?

:( It's so sad! You've expressed your emotions well. Good work! Keep writing!

~Anna~