Reviews for Fury
Illegal0Immoral chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
It's probably just me but I love the sadism you apply in your writing. For instance when I read the last few lines of this one it just made me think "That's awesome" though obviously the situation was not. I believe what I'm trying to say is the suspense you put into your poetry enhanced by the blunt surprising endings makes for a very good read.

Pyro Ghost chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
Well articulated. Very nice.
Two Of Spades chapter 1 . 4/19/2006
emoyions can often get in the way of writing, let alone speaking. then how come the best poetry is the most emotional?
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 4/19/2006
:( It's so sad! You've expressed your emotions well. Good work! Keep writing!