I think your story is pretty good, but it's annoying how Chole seems to think only Jonah is at fault with the whole sleeping with him thing, and I'm confused at when she was depressed and saying how no one loved her, since she had Jace didn'r she?

Very sweet ending. Good story.

i love this story ;] plus the classical cliche ending(

The beginning was a bit wordy for me, but it did say a lot. Interesting first chapter and nice development for the characters.

hey wazzup.

i'm up to chapter 9 dudeman...

you know who i am hahaha

- fellow P-plate stealer... almost.

HAH. HER NAME IS CHASTITY? THAT'S A WALKING OXYMORON!

cute. though there was more talking than actions in this. xD Chloe is really nosey, though. -sigh- xP onto the next chapter. . .

I wood hv loved the nedin 2b longer coz wen it finished i was just lyk..WOW! It was a lil abrupt 2 me but either way, i loved it.

ok. so i was wrong about jason... . sorry jason _ you got cheated on multiple times... and wow, all of the girls in chloe's life seem to backstab her while all of the guys in her life fall for her...hahah it must be animal magnetism or something like that..

ugh. i dont like jace. he gives me evil vibes. maybe he wont, but i think he's a player and will therefore cheat on her or play her or something...i think that chloe is pretty, but not gorgeous...if he could go out with someone like chastity, i doubt he would go out with chloe, even though he does seem pretty nice...sometimes.

i love ur story. ur style of writing is amazing coz u make a person feel as if their rite there. thats quite a talent. reading this story was a pleasure.

hey. I glad Jonah and Chloe were end up together in end. I glad it turn out was happily ever after for them. Your story was so good :)

Firstly i would like to say: well throughout the whole story i felt so argh with chloe. She's so self pitying and there's so much drama in one story. I think the thing i hate the most is how Jonah suddenly started liking her... and then how in this chapter he ignores her, but suddenly when she says i love you, he loves her too...what about his girlfriend? There's so much cheating in this story. It's not nice to read about.

Surprisingly amazing is all I can say. This would make one heck of a movie in my opinion. This was genuinely a good, realistic yet feel good story. The self-doubt did get a bit overbearing at times but doesn't it always? especially when one's a teenager. I commend you on your creation, truly great!

WHAAT! THIS CAN'T BE THE LAST CHAPTER! YOU CAN'T JUST LEAVE IT THERE! WHY DO YOU TORMENT ME! I NEVER DID ANYTHING TO YOU!

That was so great! I loved it! As you can see above If you added an epologue, I would love you forevers. *puppy-dog eyes* pwease.