Reviews for weigh me down
crinkled aster ribbon chapter 1 . 5/6/2006
pretty and painful (in a good way, somehow). the last lines are beautiful.
HauntedMisery chapter 1 . 4/23/2006
Love the poem, format, everythingBeautiful piece!
Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 4/23/2006
I love the flow of this. I can really relate to this, telling the same thing over and over again, only to have it ignored and the same questions asked all over again.

Keep it up.
Annaece's Forsaken Corpse chapter 1 . 4/23/2006
This runs nicely. I like the 6th y 7th line.
Jezsh chapter 1 . 4/19/2006
I like how it's laid out. Nice flow to it too.