Reviews for Behind Bars
Oath Jennay chapter 1 . 6/24/2006
After reading this poem multiple times this is what i got from it other than i loved the ending.

A mother and her five year old daughter are going to visit their (husband, father) in prision. This would explain the jellie shoes ahead of the stiletos. Obviously it seems the mother doesn't want to see the dad, 'every sunday subject' - maybe he's a regular in jail.

oblivious to 'every sunday somethings' would have to be the people that have come to visit him because he's alseep and doesn't notice them. And then the end, would be the mom lying through her teeth to the poor kid who's probably wanting to cry right now.

? did i hit something?