Reviews for In The Monsters Shadow
Unknown chapter 2 . 5/1/2006
Oh no! I hope he dosn't get hurt too bad! Poor guy! he probably likes Abagail. anyways can't for you to update! great story so far!
Michelle Habibi chapter 2 . 4/30/2006
it's getting GOOD! Varian doesn't seem like the ideal suitor to me. he sort of seems like those sexist males who think females should be slaves to the males by the way he was ordering Abigail around, not caring about her protests when she told him she was supposed to be the only one that was allowed to take the horse back. but he makes the story sort of complete, you know. there has to be another guy in the story besides the actual hero and heroine. the jealous one who loses the girl in the end. and Varian is that guy. at least i think decide since you're the author..have to keep reminding myself that i'm not the one in charge here...Damn it! anyways, did i review for your last chapter? i don't remember and if i didn't, i swear i will for the next one! so that sort of makes me think of another topic...when's the next chapter coming up? it better be soon...or not. as long as you update SOMEDAY...

-Michelle Habibi
Michelle Habibi chapter 1 . 4/19/2006
applause! that was very good!trés bien, mademoiselle! can't wait till you update next! and this story reminds of beauty and the beast...i've always loved that story...

-Michelle Habibi