Reviews for The Love Letter
SuzannaR chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
Nice, I liked the quick change of image again as in the previous haiku. You start off giving us an image of a letter lovingly and carefully thought out and written on the best paper, and you twist it at the end, because it was all for nothing. That's nice.

What a waste, though eh? I liked your closing line, especially since it was written in that strange, almost Shakespearean language? At first, I wondered why you wrote it like that, but now I think that it fits in well with the image of the first 2 lines.

I liked this. :)

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Solitary Fatalist chapter 1 . 8/2/2008
A very moving thought..

I was being stupid when I first read it, thinking "Was that it? It could use more lines.." And then I realized that it was a haiku.. XD
mayoopatel chapter 1 . 7/30/2006
Interesting...like it...true indeed.

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tamarkaph2006 chapter 1 . 7/11/2006
Sad indeed
onyxdragonflyy chapter 1 . 6/8/2006
:{such a waste...a heart thrown away that was never known

Great job with this!
Needa S chapter 1 . 4/29/2006
Sad, but true in ways. Splendid job!
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
Sad, but true in many cases. Good work.